{"id":1305,"date":"2023-10-28T08:30:00","date_gmt":"2023-10-28T08:30:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/gerald-hornsby.com\/blog\/?p=1305"},"modified":"2023-10-27T11:01:09","modified_gmt":"2023-10-27T11:01:09","slug":"nanowrimo-the-planning-1","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/gerald-hornsby.com\/blog\/2023\/10\/28\/nanowrimo-the-planning-1\/","title":{"rendered":"NANOWRIMO &#8211; the planning (1)"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>Over the years, I have listened to many authors speaking on their process. It&#8217;s always interesting to hear how &#8220;the professionals&#8221; do it. I remember one author (whose name I have genuinely forgotten) who told a group of aspiring writers that during the editing process, he rewrote his completed manuscripts at least 10 times.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>I thought I had misheard.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>But no &#8211; he wrote, and rewrote, his whole manuscript for each novel at least 10 times.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>At the time, I hadn&#8217;t published any novels, and I was keen to hear other people&#8217;s methodologies. But ten complete rewrites sounded completely bonkers to me. Surely, there was a better, more time-efficient, way?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Indeed there was.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<!--more-->\n\n\n\n<p>I use a number of tools to help me plan my novels, and these tools ensure that I need to do a maximum of 3 full-manuscript edits. <strong>Not rewrites<\/strong>. Edits. My first drafts don&#8217;t need developmental or story edits. The stories come out pretty clean, but the manuscripts usually need some tidying up to tell those stories better.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Before I start, I must make one thing clear &#8211; this is my process. It may not work for you, or you may think it&#8217;s too predictable. But for me, two things make it essential:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>1) It works well for a plot-driven story, such as my cozy crime series<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>2) I cannot hold the full plot of my novels in my head. I just can&#8217;t. I need to break things down &#8211; from a single sentence describing the story, adding more detail and building out the story, eventually down to having a few sentences describing individual scenes. I can then write the scene as I picture it in my head, with various backstories and red herrings floating around that scene image.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>START<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>I begin with an idea. Writing books in a series makes things a little more straightforward &#8211; you know your setting \/ location, and you know your main characters. So, for NaNo2023, my idea is: &#8220;What if someone died in a nature reserve?&#8221; My setting is a small Suffolk seaside village, which happens to have a nature reserve with a bit of a dark history to it. Allegedly.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Immediately, I have questions. Who is this person? How did they die? Why did they die?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>My mind starts churning over these questions, and as I settle on an answer, I try to fill in bits of the story which surround them. When I think I&#8217;ve got something which might work up into a complete novel, I begin using my first writing tool &#8211; The Snowflake Method. You can find about it, and the man who invented it, at:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-embed is-type-wp-embed is-provider-advanced-fiction-writing wp-block-embed-advanced-fiction-writing\"><div class=\"wp-block-embed__wrapper\">\n<blockquote class=\"wp-embedded-content\" data-secret=\"rnILqTo2et\"><a href=\"https:\/\/www.advancedfictionwriting.com\/articles\/snowflake-method\/\">The Snowflake Method For Designing A Novel<\/a><\/blockquote><iframe loading=\"lazy\" class=\"wp-embedded-content\" sandbox=\"allow-scripts\" security=\"restricted\" style=\"position: absolute; clip: rect(1px, 1px, 1px, 1px);\" title=\"&#8220;The Snowflake Method For Designing A Novel&#8221; &#8212; Advanced Fiction Writing\" src=\"https:\/\/www.advancedfictionwriting.com\/articles\/snowflake-method\/embed\/#?secret=uXI4H9GXQE#?secret=rnILqTo2et\" data-secret=\"rnILqTo2et\" width=\"600\" height=\"338\" frameborder=\"0\" marginwidth=\"0\" marginheight=\"0\" scrolling=\"no\"><\/iframe>\n<\/div><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<p>There&#8217;s also a good detailed description with plenty of examples here:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/bubblecow.com\/blog\/snowflake-method\">https:\/\/bubblecow.com\/blog\/snowflake-method<\/a><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>So for NaNo2023, I created a Single Sentence Summary (which is more of a question, to be honest):<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><em>Can a local caf\u00e9 owner, a one-time crime scene investigator, solve a mysterious death of a resident in the local nature reserve?<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>And from that, I then create a two-sentence premise:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><em>Emma Stafford&#8217;s caf\u00e9, <strong>Coffee by Emma<\/strong>, is doing well, and they have fall but forgotten the investigation which helped the police solve the murder of a local publican, a couple of months before. But when a local conspiracy theorist is found dead in a local nature reserve, something about the death seems odd to Emma, and another investigation is under way.<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>It&#8217;s not brilliant, I know, and the Snowflake Method advises spending some time getting the right initial statements.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>I then want to create four paragraphs, which describe the story in more detail. I find it useful to begin to inject some structure into my work. My four paragraphs lend themselves to being descriptions of four acts. &#8220;What?&#8221; you ask. &#8220;I thought there were three acts to a drama!&#8221;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Indeed. But Act 2, the middle act, is twice the size of Acts 1 and 3. And right in the middle of Act 2 is the Midpoint, a very important pivot point for the story. So I create four acts, all the same size: Act 1, Act 2A, Act 2B, and Act 3. Three acts, four acts, it\u2019s the same.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>If it helps, imagine the acts fulfil the following functions in one of my crime stories:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Act 1<\/strong> &#8211; opening before investigation, setup, initial enquiries, decision to progress<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Act 2A<\/strong> &#8211; maybe side story (love interest?), detailed investigation, first obstacle,\u00a0<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Act 2B<\/strong> &#8211; the investigation gets more difficult, MC suffers biggest obstacle, things look bad, oh &#8211; hang on&#8230;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Act 3<\/strong> &#8211; new impetus, new ideas, closing in on the culprit, knocking red herrings aside, final disclosure, rounding up.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>In my next post, I will continue the description of my planning process, showing some of the worksheets I use to help me in the process. 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