{"id":1406,"date":"2024-06-20T10:20:09","date_gmt":"2024-06-20T09:20:09","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/gerald-hornsby.com\/blog\/?p=1406"},"modified":"2024-06-20T10:20:11","modified_gmt":"2024-06-20T09:20:11","slug":"day-18-monthofblogging-june2024-monthofwriting","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/gerald-hornsby.com\/blog\/2024\/06\/20\/day-18-monthofblogging-june2024-monthofwriting\/","title":{"rendered":"DAY 18 – #MonthOfBlogging #June2024 #MonthOfWriting"},"content":{"rendered":"\n

SAGGY MIDDLES<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n

This is a blog post for novel and novella writers.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

It\u2019s quite easy to keep a reader engaged in your flash fiction or short story, with their limited range of characters and plots.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

But what about when you want to extend your range a little, and write longer stories? It\u2019s easy, right? Just add a few more characters, another plotline or two, maybe another location, and Bob\u2019s your uncle.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Take it from me – it\u2019s really not that simple. Don\u2019t ask me how I know.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

And there is a danger that in the middle of the wordcount (say, 30,000 words for a novel), you end up waffling. What\u2019s waffling? <\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Waffle – to speak or write at length in a vague or trivial manner.<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n

How this manifests is that your story is roaming around, not really getting anywhere. Characters appear, say something, do something, and then disappear again without having had any significant effect on the story. That, on a number of occasions, has been my story.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

If you, too, find yourself in this awful situation, what can you do?<\/p>\n\n\n\n

CHANGE SOMETHING.<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n

Have your main character break a limb, take up a new hobby, lose the love of his life. Just when you think it’s all done, and all the ends are tied up nice and neat, CHANGE SOMETHING<\/em>. PIVOT<\/em>. What’s the worst thing that can happen? The hero has vanquished his arch-enemy. He has grabbed the girl. She has kissed him (because he’s not an over-aggressive jerk, he’s your hero). Then have him (or her) contract a rare a virulent disease. Have a sink-hole open up and take her away. Have a random plane land on them, miraculously killing him but saving her, thus making her the NEW hero of the story. Ha haaa! Got you there, readers! But that’s, at least, more interesting.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

You can also \u2018design out\u2019 the saggy middle, from the start of writing. Shout out to my favourite \u2018thing\u2019, Save The Cat<\/strong> https:\/\/savethecat.com\/<\/a> Since I began using this, I NEVER have a saggy middle (in my story!<\/strong>). The StC structure \u2018designs out\u2019 sags by setting out a beat-by-beat plan for the story, ensuring that you write in the highs and lows, the changes of pace, the tension and the conflict as you begin to plan your story.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

SAVE THE CAT FOR THE WIN!<\/strong><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

SAGGY MIDDLES This is a blog post for novel and novella writers. It\u2019s quite easy to keep a reader engaged in your flash fiction or short story, with their limited range of characters and plots. But what about when you want to extend your range a little, and write longer stories? It\u2019s easy, right? Just […]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":4,"featured_media":1407,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":""},"categories":[69,6,8,15,16,17],"tags":[70,73,46,113,99,100,112,54,71,25],"class_list":["post-1406","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-advice","category-inspiration","category-my-writing","category-thinking","category-writing","category-writing-on-writing","tag-advice","tag-beginner","tag-creativity","tag-middle","tag-pace","tag-pacing","tag-saggy","tag-success","tag-tips","tag-writing-2"],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"https:\/\/gerald-hornsby.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/06\/BLOG-saggy-middle-1.jpg","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_shortlink":"https:\/\/wp.me\/p5y3CH-mG","_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/gerald-hornsby.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1406","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/gerald-hornsby.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/gerald-hornsby.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/gerald-hornsby.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/4"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/gerald-hornsby.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=1406"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/gerald-hornsby.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1406\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1408,"href":"https:\/\/gerald-hornsby.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1406\/revisions\/1408"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/gerald-hornsby.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/1407"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/gerald-hornsby.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=1406"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/gerald-hornsby.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=1406"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/gerald-hornsby.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=1406"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}